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  1. Aykhan

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    Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree or disagree?

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    The notion that the daily usage of the computers has adverse effects on children rather than positive requires serious consideration. While it is understandable why some would oppose this, I strongly disagree with this view. In the following paragraphs, I will further explain my point of view with the suitable arguments and examples.

    There are several reasons why I disagree that children have more disadvantages than advantages if they are active users of the computer. The most important one is advanced technologies can improve the way they think and make them more creative than they were. If they use computers in a proper way, parents will notice that their child has become more intellectually developed. In my own experience, after I have become an advanced user of modern technologies, I have noticed that my memory significantly improved and, much more, now I understand the technical subject more easily than before.

    Furthermore, exploiting the computers actively is also about being technically savvy. In this context, nowadays, it is required to be familiar with the latest technologies and to be able to use them. Each workplace was provided by the computer and employer's first demand is to have computer skills. For instance, my brother was employed on his first attempt, after he had proved that he is the advanced user of the computer.

    In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that the usage of the computers by children has several advantages and that is why I emphatically support it.
     
  2. Aykhan

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    Some people think that exercise is the key to good health while others believe that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides of the argument and provide your opinion.

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    The key to good health is a thought-provoking observation. While some think, that the physical activity is indispensable for the health, others believe that the proper diet is more beneficial in order to be healthy. In my opinion, both viewpoints have merit. In the following paragraphs, I will further elaborate on this with the help of arguments and examples.

    First and foremost, exercises can be attributed to physical activity. People can go in for sports and train hard and become stronger than they were. As a result, they will be always in a shape and cheerful. For instance, my brother has been practising martial arts, since 2012, and he is never being sicked.

    However, the right diet cannot be ignored. If people eat specific food at the right time, they will notice the significant positive changes in their body. Even their mood becomes more positive. This will be a result of the chemical reaction between food ingredients and body cells. Furthermore, having a professional dietician is another important factor.

    In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that making exercises and eating food, which is enriched by the useful components, are both relevant in appropriate conditions and aligning with any one side is simply short-sighted.
     
  3. MrGrey

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    Нужны сложные предложения - не ставьте точку, если набрали меньше 18 слов. Среднее - 22.

    Нужно больше перечислений - это демонстрация вокабуляра. Пихайте их везде, где можно и даже чуть-чуть где нельзя. Даже если где-то это будет стилистически неоправданно и коряво, то машина этого все равно не заметит.

    Правильнее и лучше вот так: "he has never had a cold or sickness of any kind"

    С запятыми сильный перебор - не переносите правила русского на английский.
    В предложениях 2, 4 во вступлении запятые не нужны вовсе. Since 2012 не нужно выделять запятыми.
    Rule of thumb: обычно перед that запятая не нужна, а перед which нужна. Ознакомьтесь с restrictive/nonrestrictive clauses.

    И ещё про вокабуляр - попробуйте взять пару девяточных эссе pte или IELTS на свой личный вкус и прогнать через анализатор слов, на который я здесь уже ссылался. Оцените долю слов с рангом выше 3000. Возьмите пару своих, а потом сравните показатель. Теперь у вас есть ориентир.
    Вообще при любой возможности прежде чем писать какое-то слово найдите ему "крутой" аналог, оцените насколько он годится в данном контексте и впредь используйте его. 3 таких слова в эссе должны быть обязательно (для хорошей оценки)
     
  4. Aykhan

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    Во 2-ом согласен. Перед that не надо, это с русского остаётся. Но в 4-ом думаю надо, потому как уточняет, что в последующих параграфах буду т.д. и т.п.
     
  5. MrGrey

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    Не настолько хорошо владею английской пунктуацией, но в ровно такой же ситуации в свое время, чтобы быстрее отучиться лепить везде "русские" запятые, я выбрал другой подход - не ставить запятую, если мне кажется, что ее можно не ставить.
     
  6. Aykhan

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    Учту, спасибо за отзывы :blush:
     
  7. Ksy

    Ksy Житель Австралии Житель Австралии

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    За эссе такого уровня в Айэлтс не получить больше 6. Когда я говорила, что не надо париться особо со смыслом, я имела ввиду, что мысли должны быть прямые и простые и не надо никого удивлять своей образованностью.
    Но не до такой же степени! ( Булшит какой-то, прости господи.
    Процесс покажется легче, если представить что вам райтинг нужен в жизни. Мне довольно часто приходится разговаривать, но пишу я еще красноречивее и яснее и это реально работает! То как вы пишете говорит многое о том какой вы человек и как с вами можно и нельзя себя вести. Это важно и это многое решает. Проворачивание убогого шаблона раз за разом не разовьет способности писать красиво.

    indispensable
    reiterate
    вот эти слова вообще странные, они никогда не используются, есть нормальные удобоваримые синонимы
    остальные слова напротив очень простые и много за вокаб это эссе не получит
     
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  8. Aykhan

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    Ну раз уж вы не слышали эти слова или вам кажутся странными, боюсь представить какие вы знаете.

    Способность писать красиво...ну-ну. мы не на марафон красивого письма выходим, а хотим чтобы всё соответствовало требованиям машины, а именно логическая связь в эссе. Это то, что больше всего машину интересует.
    А вот писать посты, подбирая соответствующие слова, некоторым совсем не помешало бы.
     
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    Тема про PTE.
     
  10. Aykhan

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    Тема:
    Cinema has the power to shape our beliefs. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Provide suitable examples from your own experience.

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    The notion that cinema may have an effect on our beliefs requires serious consideration. While it is understandable why some would oppose this, I strongly agree with this view. In the following paragraphs, I will further explain my point of view with the suitable examples and arguments.

    There are several reasons why I agree that the different kind of films can change our views. The most important one is we gain the certain experience by watching films. If we watch a particular genre of movie, we observe how actors act there, behave themselves in various situations, and, unwittingly, this experience stores in our memory. In my own experience, my belief towards the certain points in life were changed after I watched several films, which were based on real stories.

    Furthermore, the power of movies is also about changing our attitudes. In this context, after watching a considerable amount of films we can behave ourselves differently in particular situations. People can also feel emotional changes. For instance, my friend revealed in himself new points after being a fan of superhero movies and this can be a proof that films have a certain influence on our emotions.

    In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that cinemas have a significant impact on human beings that is why I emphatically support the view which claims it.

    P.S. Тема достаточно неординарная, но данная тема была на недавних экзаменах по PTE в этом месяце. Будьте готовы.
     
  11. Aykhan

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    Тема:
    The human race will be responsible for its own extinction. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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    The notion that humanity will be accountable for its extinction requires serious consideration. While it is understandable why some would oppose this, I strongly agree with this view. In the following paragraphs, I will further explain my point of view with the suitable examples and arguments.

    There are several reasons why I disagree that people will be responsible for the cease of their existence. The most important one is ecology has become more contaminated and fault for this lays on people’s shoulders. Even, eco-structure of the Earth changed dramatically. In my own experience, I see a lot of people careless about saving nature, not to mention, that they put their waste wherever they want.

    Furthermore, the forthcoming extinction of humanity is also about the latest technologies. In this context, people are trying to develop artificial intelligence and along with its advantages, it may become a serious threat to our existence. For instance, a lot of countries have already begun to use artificial intelligence in the various fields of our life without having the proper control measures, and the consequences of that might be fatal for all human beings.

    In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that I emphatically support the thought that humanity will be liable for its own extinction.

    P.S. Тема взята из недавно прошедшего экзамена по PTE. Будьте готовы.
     
  12. Aykhan

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    Sports and games create disturbance in students’ life because students cannot fully concentrate on their studies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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    The notion that sports activities and games are a cause of distraction in a student’s life requires serious consideration. While it is understandable why some would oppose this, I strongly disagree with this view. In the following paragraphs, I will further explain my point of view with the suitable examples and arguments.

    There are several reasons why I disagree that sport can disturb students in their education. The most important one is that by doing any sports activities, those who are studying can refresh themselves and become more efficient in their educational activity. Besides that, their brain can take a rest and their memory might be improved. In my own experience, when I was studying at university and going in for sports, I felt how productive I became and the ability to gain knowledge enhanced.

    Furthermore, being active in a sport is also about being healthy. In this context, if people cannot be healthy, there will be no need to educate themselves and see the results of their education, because they will concentrate on recovery. For instance, our neighbour was a well-educated man, but he died and the trigger of his death was a sedentary life.

    In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that being actively involved in a sport, while you are a student, has several advantages and that is why I emphatically support it.
     
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    Trying to save endangered species from extinction is a waste of valuable resources. Do you agree or disagree?

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    The notion that attempts to protect some species from extinction mean meaningless spent of resources requires serious consideration. While it is understandable why some would support it, I strongly disagree with this view. In the following paragraphs, I will further explain my point of view with the suitable examples and arguments.

    There are several reasons why I disagree that saving endangered species is not practical. The most important one is some of this animals or plants can be very valuable for human beings. Besides that, extinction of particular species can be a cause of death of the other species and this can fact might be a start of a chain reaction. For example, in South America, specific kinds of monkeys disappeared and after analyzing this case, scientists have concluded that it has happened because the specific type of plants had extinct before, which were the main source of food for vanished monkeys.

    Furthermore, protecting this kind of animals or plants is also saving the nature. In this context, flora and fauna of the Earth can change dramatically if people do not try to save species. Because of some plants existence, we can breathe but imagine what would happen if this type of plants ceases to exist. For instance, according to some researches provided by scientists of the New South Wales existence of some plants is crucial for humans.

    In conclusion, I would like to reiterate I disagree with the notion that people can save valuable resources if they cease to protect some endangered species and that is why I emphatically support the opposite side.
     
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    Learning a new language at an early age is helpful for children. Do you think it has a positive influence on their future development or has some adverse effects?

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    Although overwhelming majority claims that teaching small children a new language could negatively affect their development in the future, some citizens tend to have the opposite view. I strongly agree with the latter. This essay will further explain my position by discussing the main arguments and providing examples.

    First of all, it is understandable why some people believe that learning additional language could be harmful for youngsters. The main reason is that in a young age kids already have a considerable volume of information to consume and process. And that could be difficult for some of them. However, according to recent studies, the younger the children are, the easier it is for them to learn a new language.

    Furthermore, the process of learning another language in the early stages of life broadens one’s horizons. This is because kids are introduced with the culture and traditions, that are different from their own. As a result, along with another language, young boys and girls acquire skills to be more flexible and independent in life, which is beneficial for their future development.

    In conclusion, I believe that it is advantageous for children to be taught a new language while they are small, since it is easier for them and contributes to their future life.

    Использовала структуру E2language в параграфах:
    para 1: restate side 1 (from your perspective), give reason/s, examples, conclude
    para 2: restate side 2 (from your perspective), give reason/s, examples, conclude

    По привычке, после IELTS, долго соображала, как же так противоположную сторону описывать, чтобы самому себе не противоречить потом, и чтобы четко прослеживалось мое мнение в течение эссе. Таким образом, чтобы не страдал written discourse. В итоге, поняла из примера на канале E2, что можно использовать схему:
    para 1: "некоторые думают так, потому что ... Но все же ... (добавляем примеры, что все же они не особо правы)"
    para 2: добавляем еще один свой аргумент
    Таким образом, такая схема подходит и для аргументативного эссе (когда можно сразу сказать, я согласен с теми-то по двум причинам - два параграфа), и для discussion эссе - когда вопрос требует обсудить обе стороны, или и плюсы и минусы.

    Лично для меня это был большой затык, когда я пыталась разобраться с эссе, может у кого-то тоже есть такая проблема))
    Но, возможно, я слишком заморачиваюсь, так как в PTE вроде с эссе проще, да и вес у него не такой в общем балле.
     
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    What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in an era in which new things are constantly being invented?

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    These days technological advances result in everyday inventions. While some people believe that this has significant negative sides, I strongly support the view that this is mostly beneficial for our society. This essay will further explain my position on this matter by discussing the main arguments and providing examples.

    First of all, it is impossible to ignore that the constant production of so many new things has its drawbacks. The most notable of which is that along with the new interesting functions, the world also gets the considerable amount of waste. For example, the previous versions of gadgets are no longer needed and being thrown away before they are even broken.

    However, I believe that the merits far outweigh the disadvantages. Firstly, the new technologies allow people to solve the problem of pollution by using various scientific methods, such as recycling, green energy, or introduction of new materials. Moreover, new inventions provide us with new opportunities for growth, both individually and as a society. For instance, online education is one of those opportunities that is possible only because of the technological achievements.

    In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that there are more positives than negatives of the today’s tendency to constantly create new things.
     
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    The claim that animals have rights has been a matter of debate since 1970s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned? Do you agree or disagree?

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    Although overwhelming majority claims that today’s zoos do not have any harmful effect on animals that live in them, some citizens tend to have the opposite view. I strongly support the latter. This essay will further explain my position on this issue by discussing the main arguments and providing examples.

    First of all, no zoo can duplicate the natural habitat of any animal. Therefore, the zoos’ fauna naturally does not get suitable conditions to live as comfortably as it does in the real nature. Recent studies have shown that the mental state of the animals that live in a zoo is negatively affected by the lack of natural way of life.

    Furthermore, by displaying the animals in the zoos we give the younger generation a negative example of how the nature should be treated. For example, when my younger brother went to a zoo, he thought that it is normal to catch and keep any animal you want. Therefore, the zoos are not the best way to learn about exotic creatures.

    In conclusion, I strongly support the view that zoos only harm animals for it is unnatural to them, and plays a negative role in children’s education. That is why I think that in modern world zoos should be banned.
     
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    Сегодня на экзамене в Стамбуле, 2 мои темы эссе и одна тема мужа:
    1) Некоторые родители считают, что ни к чему детям посещать дополнительные классы после школы. Ваше мнение.
    2) Некоторые считают, что неправильно вычитать баллы у студентов, кто невовремя сдает работы. Ваше мнение, и как можно решить этот вопрос.
    3) Современная медицина увеличивает среднюю продолжительность жизни. Перечислите + и -".

    Сорри, что на русском, пока голова не соображает от напряжения и не получается вспомнить и сформировать на английском))
     
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    Здравствуйте Ksy. Не подскажете где поискать эти структуры? Может у вас есть?
     
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    Пользователь Ksy была заблокирована на данном форуме за неоднократное нарушение правил форума.
    По поводу структур, поищите в интернете или вот в этой теме. Также можете просмотреть тему Материалы PTE.
     

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