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  1. strider

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    Может я ошибаюсь, но здесь кажется более правильным написать так:
    In conclusion, I would like to reiterate...
     
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    Я тоже замечал это не раз. Так как, если заметили, пишу по шаблону. Но в некоторых написано как вы написали в конце, а в некоторых так. Не знаю точно,но в принципе, смысл одинаковый, наверное. Я бы хотел повторить или я бы повторил, что...
     
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    One of the most pressing problems facing the world today is overpopulation. What policies do you believe governments should adopt to address the causes and effects of this problem?

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    The problem of overpopulation has assumed a massive proportion now. This has not one but several causes. In this essay, I will discuss the causes and then present possible solutions, with the help of reasoned arguments and examples.

    The most severe cause of overcrowding is the ineffective regulation of settlements in the big cities. People prefer to live in megacities and that is the reason why a lot of big cities in the world face with the problem of overpopulation. Furthermore, lack of workplaces in the regional areas of the countries is another cause of this problem. For instance, in Australia new migrants, as soon as they fulfil demands of living in the regional area, try to settle in big cities, such as Sydney or Melbourne.

    Despite the serious nature of the problem, it can still be tackled if everyone concerned assumes responsibility and gets involved themselves in solving the problem. First and foremost, the preventive measures must be implemented to control the problem from spreading further. This should be combined with the opening of workplaces in the regional areas to ensure an enduring solution is attained. As an example, in Canada, the government has opened a lot of places in regions and that is how people linked to these places.

    In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that overpopulation is a problem that needs to be dealt with urgently and measures such as those discussed in the essay can greatly solve the problem.
     
  4. Aykhan

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    What are the advantages and disadvantages of new technologies? Support your view with a real-life example.

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    The question whether modern technologies advantageous or not requires serious consideration. While some believe, it has a significant negative impact, I believe it has more advantages than disadvantages. In the following paragraphs, I will explain my point of view with supporting examples and arguments.

    At the outset, I would acknowledge that the contemporary technologies have a few negatives. The most important of which is the harmful radio waves, which can affect people's health. In addition, frustration which is the cause of using these technologies cannot be ignored. For instance, my colleague suddenly realized that he spent a lot of time by testing the technical features of his gadget and, as a result, he missed all his deadlines at work.

    However, the advantages far outweigh these few disadvantages. It is impossible to ignore that state-of-the-art gadgets have alleviated our life. Furthermore, being helpful at work makes this an even more beneficial proposition. This fact is supported by the several international studies that highlight how employees became more productive after using modern devices in order to solve a lot of problems related to their work.

    In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that the usage of the modern gadgets has several advantages and therefore any decision to exploit them should be taken without any hesitation.
     
  5. Aykhan

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    It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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    The notion that marriage is not necessary before graduating from school or having a job requires serious consideration. While it is understandable why some would support this, I strongly disagree with this view. In the following paragraphs, I will further explain my point of view with the suitable examples and arguments.

    There are several why I disagree that people should marry after finishing their education at school or before getting a job. The most important one is the life experience. Before making this serious step in life, marry someone, people must have a certain experience in life, because creating a family demands moral preparation. And this experience can be gain only after facing difficulties. In my own experience, I married after graduating from university and getting a job and, besides that, I have seen a lot of different things in life which made me ready to create a family and living with another person.

    Furthermore, getting married is also about financial stability. In this context, those who are preparing to create a family must be ensured that they can provide a stable financial life. Otherwise, the number of divorces may significantly increase because lack of finances is one of the most disseminated causes of the divorces. For instance, a good friend of mine has tied his life with a person before finishing his study and, not to mention that, he did not have a job, subsequently, they have divorced after six months of being a family.

    In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that getting married before finishing the study at school or being employed has several disadvantages and that is why I emphatically oppose it.
     
  6. Aykhan

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    It is sometimes said that a high salary is the most important factor in choosing a job. Do you agree?

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    The notion that a high wage is a crucial factor in choosing a job requires serious consideration. While it is understandable why some would support this, I strongly disagree with this view, In the following paragraphs, I will further explain my point of view with the suitable examples and arguments.

    There are several reasons why I disagree that being highly paid is not so important as it seems, initially. The most important one is you can have a high salary but not have a job of your dream. It would be better to working in the desired field with the normal people rather than working in a highly paid job but in the hated sphere or with abnormal people. In my own experience, I had a job in which my income was high, but I could not work there because of my colleagues.

    Furthermore, high payments in your job are also about the difficulty of the job. In this context, you can have high payments, but you will do a lot of harm to your health because of exceeding amount of the stress in your life. For instance, my brother left the job in which he had to sit till 9 P.M, instead of 6 P.M.

    In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that looking for the high wages in choosing a job has several disadvantages and that is why I emphatically oppose it.
     
  7. Aykhan

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    Тема:
    Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Others believe that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

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    Providing the sporting event in the country is a thought-provoking observation, While some think, it will bring more benefits, others believe that it would be a cause of many issues. In my opinion, both viewpoints have merit. In the following paragraphs, I will further elaborate on this with the help of arguments and examples.

    First and foremost, orchestrating event related to the sport can be attributed to making the country famous in an international arena. A lot of tourists will come from overseas as spectators and will have the certain impressions. As a result, the country will become well-known all over the world and this will bring an additional tourist stream to the country. For instance, after providing the first European Olympic Games, Azerbaijan has become the famous destination for tourism among the European countries.

    However, the fact that expenses, related to the sporting events at the international level, are high cannot be ignored. The government needs a lot of money in order to organize an event of such level and this fact might be a cause of the increased taxes. Furthermore, changing infrastructure, in order to accommodate tourist's needs, within the country is another important factor.

    In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that being a host of an international sporting event and problems which would occur, as a result of this event, are both relevant in appropriate conditions and aligning with any one side is simply short-sighted.
     
  8. Евгения

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    Мне мой учитель по эссе, говорил что "a lot of" надо употреблять по минимуму ( a lot of money - и лучше по возможности заменять на что-то другое, например large amount of money)
     
  9. Aykhan

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    Да, вы правы. Можно также употребить a considerable amount of...
     
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    That doesn't matter in PTE. And in real life too.
     
  11. Евгения

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    Why not? It is a PTE-Academic exam, and the usage of "a lot of" is considered as baby-English. So in my opinion, it matters, in case you want to receive 79+ score.
     
  12. Жизнь

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    Where is it written about PTE and baby-English? You can use any words there, it won't decrease your mark.
     
  13. Евгения

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    It is not written anywhere. My teacher, who is really good at writing interesting and grammatically correct essays, gave me this advice. I have shared it here. What is the problem? People can whether accept the advice or not. It is their choice.
     
  14. Жизнь

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    It's not about PTE. It's about IELTS and other essays!
    To achieve higher marks in this or that exam you should focus on its specifics!!!
    That's the problem for people to get 79/79/79/79 in PTE, a great one! So they should focus what to do in PTE!
     
  15. Aykhan

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    Some people prefer to live in a house, while others think that there are more advantages of living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages to living in a house rather than in an apartment?

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    The question of whether living in a house or in an apartment is advantageous or not requires serious consideration. While some believe having a house has a significant positive impact, I believe it has more disadvantages than advantages. In the following paragraphs, I will further explain my point of view with the supporting arguments and examples.

    At the outset, I would acknowledge that living in a mansion has a few positives. The most important of which is a spacious territory, where habitats can walk or hold parties. In addition, having a backyard cannot be ignored. For instance, my friend has a big house in which we, frequently, are gathered and play different games which require a huge amount of space.

    However, the disadvantages far outweigh these few advantages. It is impossible to ignore that those who live in a mansion should make efforts to keep it clean and tidy. Furthermore, a considerable amount of expenses makes this an even more detrimental proposition. This fact is supported by the several international studies that highlight the costs of the mansion owners.

    In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that being the habitat of the big house has several disadvantages and therefore any decision related to a choice where to live, in a house or in a flat, should only be taken after serious consideration.
     
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    We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer technology. It is used in business, crime detection and even to fly planes. Is this dependence on technology a good thing or should we be suspicious of its benefits?

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    The question whether an exceeded amount of using modern technologies is advantageous or not requires serious consideration. While some think it has a significant negative impact, I believe it has more advantages than disadvantages. In the following paragraphs, I will further explain my point of view with the supporting arguments and examples.

    At the outset, I would acknowledge that being an active user of computer technologies has a few negatives. The most important of which is harmful radio waves. In addition, the specific harm to the human's sight cannot be ignored. For instance, after using the latest technologies at work, my friend has become almost blind.

    However, the advantages far outweigh these few disadvantages. It is impossible to ignore that the state-of-the-art technologies have significantly alleviated our lives. Furthermore, using them in different spheres, which are important for human's existence, makes this an even more beneficial proposition. This fact is supported by the several international studied that highlight the importance of modern technologies in social life.

    In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that actively using computer technologies has several advantages and therefore any decision related to their use should be taken without any hesitation.
     
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    The governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. Do you agree?

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    The notion that developed countries should help the poorer nations requires serious consideration. While it is understandable why some would oppose this, I strongly agree with this view. In the following paragraphs, I will further explain my point of view with the suitable examples and arguments.

    There are several reasons why I agree that richer countries must lend a helping hand to the countries which are still in the developing phase. The most important one is helping another government means to create an alliance with them. In case of war with other countries, that one which has helped to the poorer will have support. For instance, Canada has helped Venezuela and now they are strategic partners in numerous global projects.

    Furthermore, assisting the weaker country is also about making it dependent. In this context, the one which helps others in particular region will have the certain ascendancy. The country, which was helped by a powerful one, will appeal again for the support, and that is how they make themselves dependent. For example, Russia has helped to the different weaker countries in the region and now have the certain authority.

    In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that being the hand of help to the poorer countries has several advantages and that is why I emphatically support it.

    P.S. Немного отклонился от темы, как видите, но результат за контент всё равно засчитали. Смотрите вложение.
     

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  18. Евгений Калашников

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    Айхан, подскажите, что это за ресурс, откуда сделан принтскрин?
     
  19. Aykhan

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    Пожалуйста, войдите, чтобы видеть содержимое

    Алгоритм оценки на письме работает идентично алгоритму PTE реального экзамена. Хотя бывает шалит иногда, но дорабатывают сейчас.
     
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    Имхо, нужно фокусироваться на тех аспектах эссе, которые реально критичны для оценки. Если вы можете избежать использования a lot of - be my guest, это добавит вам капельку очков за вокабуляр, а если не можете - не беда. Действительно беда если вы не сможете обеспечить связность текста. Я даже не про пресловутый content/task response, а про вплетение каждого отдельного предложения и даже отдельных фраз в канву. Кстати, машинка это проверяет на раз-два. Если в предложении нет linking device - это висяк, гарантированный минус в оценку (ладно если одно, но ведь обычно проблема проходит через все эссе).
    Я в другой теме выкладывал большой текст нужно писать эссе для IELTS. Уверяю, оно канает и для PTE.
    Вообще, я уверен, что свой высокий балл я получил во многом благодаря тому, что относился к PTE- машине именно как к машине - как к дуре, если угодно. Ей можно наплести что угодно, любую чушь, если только! эта чушь укладывается в её концепцию мироустройства. А вся ее ее концепция описана в скор-гайде.
     

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